James/ Luka
Well done - there is evidence of focused, relevant, technical research here. Luka, your technical analysis is particularly thorough and thoughtful and your opening deconstuction does look at both technical, thematic and institutional issues. James, your research is also relevant, however does lack detail, particularly on media languages.
However, what is missing from the blog is any conversation or record about your own idea development - no posts beyond the bare minimum list given. I know that you have had numerous discussions about location, style, narrative and yet that is not documented. This is vital for a L4. At the moment, your planning is at a L3 (James) and high L3 (Luka.) Work on this immediately to improve your grade.
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